√偶是新人，翻唱的是Mobb Deep的shook ones

smallpotato

Word up son, word
yeah, to all the killers and a hundred dollar billas

(yo I got the phone thing, knowmsayin', keep your eyes open)

for real niggas who ain't got no feelings

(keep your eyes open)
(no doubt, no doubt son, I got this, I got this)
(just watch my back, I got this first, yo)

check it out now
(word up, say it to them niggas, check this out it's a murda)
[Prodigy]

I got you stuck off the realness, we be the infamous
you heard of us
official Queensbridge murderers
the Mobb comes equipped with warfare, beware
of my crime family who got nuff shots to share
for all of those   who wanna profile and pose
rock you in your face, stab your brain wit' your nosebone
you all alone in these streets, cousin
every man for theirself in this land we begunnin'
and keep them shook crews runnin'
like they supposed to
they come around but they never come close to
I can see it inside your face
you're in the wrong place
cowards like you just get they're whole body laced up
with bullet holes and such
speak the wrong words man and you will get touched
you can put your whole army   against my team and
I guarantee you it'll be your very last time breathin'
your simple words just don't move me
you're minor, we're major
you all up in the game and don't deserve to be a player
don't make me have to call your name out
your crew is featherweight
my gunshots'll make you levitate
I'm only nineteen but my mind is old
and when the things get for real my warm heart turns cold another
   nigga deceased, another story gets told
it ain't nothin' really
hey, yo dun spark the Phillie
so I can get my mind off these yellowbacked niggas
why they still alive I don't know, go figure
meanwhile back in Queens the realness is foundation
if I die    I couldn't choose a better location
when the slugs penetrate    you feel a burning sensation
getting closer to God    in a tight situation
now, take these words home and think it through
or the next rhyme I write might be about you
Chorus:
Son, they shook...
'cause ain't no such things as halfway crooks
scared to death, scared to look
they shook
'cause ain't no such things as halfway crooks
scared to death, scared to look
livin' the live that of diamonds and guns
there's numerous ways you can choose to earn funds...earn funds
some of 'em get shot, locked down and turn nuns
cowardly hearts end straight up shook ones...shook ones
he ain't a crook son, he's just a shook one...shook one


[Havoc]
For every rhyme I write, its 25 to life
it's a must the gats we trust safeguardin' my life,
ain't no time for hesitation
that only leads to incarceration
you don't know me, there's no relation Queensbridge niggas don't play
I don't got time for your petty thinking mind son, I'm bigga than those   claimin' that you pack heat but you're scared to hold
and when the smoke clears you'll be left with one in your dome
13 years in the projects, my mentality is what, kid you talk a good one
but you don't want it sometimes I wonder  
do I deserve to live
am I going to burn in hell for all the things I did
no time to dwell on that 'cause my brain reacts
front if you want kid, lay on your back
I don't fake that kid you know I bring it to you live
stay in a child's place, kid you out o' line
criminal minds thirsty for recognition
I'm sippin' E&J, got my mind flippin'
I'm buggin' think I'm how bizar to hold my hustlin'
get that loot kid, you know my function
cause long as I'malivI'ma live illegal
and once I get on I'ma put on, on my people react mix to lyrics like Macs I hit    your dome up
when I roll up, don't be caught sleepin' cause I'm creepin'
Chorus:
Son, they shook...
'cause ain't no such things as halfway crooks
scared to death and scared to look
(he's just a shook one)
they shook...
'cause ain't no such things as halfway crooks
scared to death and scared to look
(we live the live that of diamonds)
they shook...
'cause ain't no such things as halfway crooks
scared to death and scared to look
they shook...
'cause ain't no such things as halfway crooks, crooks..
livin' the live that of diamonds and guns
there's numerous ways you can choose to earn funds...earn funds
but some of 'em get shot, locked down and turn nuns
cowardly hearts end straight up shook ones...shook ones
he ain't a crook son, he's just a shook one...shook one
Yeah, yeah, yeah
To all the villains and a hundred dollar billas
To real brothers who ain't got no dealings
G-yeah, the whole Bridge, Queens get the money
41st side (he's just a shook one)
keepin' it real (you know)
Queens get the money...
(Talk fades out)

[ 本帖最后由 smallpotato 于 2007-2-1 13:51 编辑 ]

djpanda

过来支持一下新人
楼主的RAP功底很强
就是录音的后期应该加强
感觉人声被控制住了
还有建议楼主发歌时在标题写上原唱的名字

alancon

感觉很不错的说唱~~ 很律动~支持一下~!!

熊猫奶爸

RAP强人啊很高兴认识你啊   呵呵

smallpotato

楼上不是伊藤吗?我是一滴冰,好久不见

smallpotato

原帖由 djpanda 于 2007-2-1 02:36 发表
过来支持一下新人
楼主的RAP功底很强
就是录音的后期应该加强
感觉人声被控制住了
还有建议楼主发歌时在标题写上原唱的名字

非常感谢朋友的建议,昨天发贴发了半见没发成功,后来是网管大人给搞定的

Billie.J

原来是首RAP歌曲，因为没发上原唱所以也不知道是哪个RAP歌手的歌曲。。。LZ唱的还可以，节奏的率动性很强，不过感觉感情的起伏不明显，好象整首下来都没有高潮部分，英文发音再清晰些就好了，如果不看歌词，偶基本听不清LZ唱的啥。。。不过也有可能是人声太靠后，音量小了点的原因~~~继续加油哈，支持新人~~！

smallpotato

to 斑竹

原唱Mobb Deep,八英里片头曲
多谢指点

另外,你的翻唱主页不存在,晕啊?

[ 本帖最后由 smallpotato 于 2007-2-1 13:59 编辑 ]

mcshahao

英语非常的好。。。但是如果是用自己的风格唱，那就更好了