Life teaches us who we are!

我是你快乐的鱼

下了一天的雨...泡了一下午的网...心里觉得特别凉...呵呵...

茫然的在论坛里走走...貌似没几个熟悉的身影...可能真的是我自己老了吧...呵呵...

我也真是想换个ID...换个心情...可是,妙妙说不好...呵呵...

╃迷☆茫╃好看吗?!...在这儿当个纪念吧...西西...

听了歌就走了...出去淋淋雨或许心情会好些吧...

某人...快点好起来吧...貌似偶记得你不是这样的人啊...你是怎么了?!

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考拉mp

某拉来报道了。。。。

下午某拉突然接到某鱼派的任务，让偶翻译这东东，由于某拉英语丢弃NNNNN久，几乎退到小学水平了，能力实在有限！！！Sn0D_image

里面肯定毛病多多，你自己再改下吧。。。看来不受点刺激真不行，今天开始要努力回去啃英语书本了。。。5555555555555。。。。。vg6z_image

偶就纳闷了。。你咋不去找你那些考过专八的同学翻捏？找偶。。汗= =|||


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可能真的是命运的作弄吧,毕业后的我们都回到原本属于我们的城市,而且,还进了同一家公司.

日子就这样平淡的过了四年,我们日复一日就仿似什么都没发生过的各自忙碌着;
见面时的平淡、礼让,让我自己都忘记了过去的种种.

就在我马上要离开家的前一天,听到了他已经结婚的消息.

一切应该结束了!呵呵...

此时的我只愿在远方默默地为他祈祷;只愿他一切过的比我好!

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某鱼啊。。下面是某拉翻译的烂东东，你着急，偶也米太讲究了，厄：

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May be it is just the destiny.

After graduated,we returned to the citys where we belong to and entered into the same corporation.

We were always busy with our own things in the four years as if nothing
had happend between us;

Treatting friendly and politely with each other,I almost forget the past events...

But hardly had I left home than I heard he just had got married!

well...I knew that everthing is over...

And at the present moment,the only thing I can do is just pray for him with all my heart.

I wish him joy and happiness foever.....

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考拉mp

鱼鱼。。。。

某拉手机刚才突然米银子被停机了。。。汗。。。

米办法短信你。。。

明天偶去充钱钱。。。厄。。。。。dNKc_image

枫叶飘飘

谁说的要"等你一千年"?
为了"等你一千年"的人，好好爱自己！--------???
汗,太单纯了~~~
有一千年吗?
谎言往往是最美丽的,还不如"等你一年"来的真实!!!
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回头看看自己的话````
恩,经典!

我是你快乐的鱼

某拉拉...偶还以为你素吃饭就米再给偶回捏...呵呵...原来素米钱钱鸟...西西...

偶把偶写的给你粘上来看下吧....貌似偶现在就想碰死算了...

我是你快乐的鱼

I heard he merried!
     
     He and I were fellow-villagers, we didn't know each other before 1999. 7 years ago, we left hometown for each business, and we came across not long before. At the beginning of the first year in our Univercity, we often talked about our future and life which should be bright an wonderful. However,I remember something on that time which deeply impressed me what made us become closer. We took a trip to went to the ancient city ---- pingyao, that's our first date when we fell in love each other. The surperise was the feeling when he held my hands. Let me felt warm which within two persons temperature from the biggest and warm palms. As time went on, I discontinued our relationship to him on my second year in our Univercity. The rason we broken up that was I didn't think he was an independent boy, it was just i think. Even though i didn't get accustom to my life without him at the beginning. i grew up, and so did he. We graduated and our love was fade away...

     It may be really the teasing of destiny, all lf us after graduated, we went back to the city that originally belong to us, and acceded to the same company. Day was so dull as to pass for years, what we imitated as nothing happened, day by day was busy each. The dull, unfamiliar while meeting, let myself to forgot all stories of the past.

     The day before i will leave home at once, i have heard he news that he merried. Everything should be over! oh... i only wish to pray for him quietly in distant plaed at this moment; only wish his everything goes well better than me!

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考拉mp

Originally posted by 我是你快乐的鱼 at 2006-5-13 09:05:
I heard he merried!
     
     He and I were fellow-villagers, we didn't know each other before 1999. 7 years ago, we left hometown for each business, and we came across not long bef ...

某拉的批改作文如下，挖卡卡：

1。We took a trip to went to the ancient city 这句，还用用加“to went ”么？

   我怎么感觉应该把这个删除掉？took a trip 已经代表“旅行了”“to went ”是不是多余了呢？你再看看吧。

2。that's our first date when we fell in love each other.：这句，应该是fell in love  with each other吧？应该加个“with”才对吧？。


3。I discontinued our relationship to him ：这个应该是"with"吧？

4.The rason we broken up that was ：应该改成"was that"

5.it was just i think : 改成it was just what  i think.  中间加个“what”就对了。

6.We graduated and our love was fade away...：这句our love was fade away，“fade” 是动词吧？是否应该把“was ”删除呢？

7。The day before i will leave home at once, i have heard the news that he merried.

这句：我图红的部分都有问题，既然已经是过去的事情了，就要用过去式了呀。

   “will”是肯定不对的，应该是“would”吧？

    “i have heard”应该改成“i had heard”吧？表示“过去的过去”，应该用过去完成时啦。

    “that he merried”：改成“that he got merried”

其实推翻上面改过的3个地方，我觉得这句话比较好的表达方式应该是：

I  heard  the news that he had got merried.k1Yc_image


                                
                                                



                       完工

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　　　　　　如果要等待千年，那就和某魔一起换回个不死滴生命吧~``

　　　　　　只素余生痛苦`~`

　　　　　　鱼鱼要开心才好捏~``

　　　　　　

　　　　　　

　　　　　　
　　　

考拉mp

死鱼啊。。。。。。。

累死某拉了。。。。。。dNKc_image

现在都凌晨了。。。。。某拉饿死了。。。。。55555555vg6z_image

觅食去。。。。。。。。。。。

改的就这样了。估计我也不是完全正确，但至少你可以再看下啦。。。

吃完做梦去 = =||||||| Sn0D_image

我是你快乐的鱼

抱住某拉猛啃啊...偶现在都快被作文搞的死掉了...偶先抄下来...

PS:其实,我觉得现在最难表达的一句就是,小男孩拉住小女孩手的时候那点心理的描述...

我想了N久...都没想到个好的表达...你再想想...


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