√新人在发一首MAROON5 的歌

nsync1982

新人在发一首MAROON5 的歌 THIS LOVE 请斑竹,还有各位大虾 多多指教,让小弟天天进步哈!谢谢了!
This Love

I was so high I did not recognize
The fire burning in her eyes
The chaos that controlled my mind
Whispered goodbye and she got on a plane
Never to return again
But always in my heart

This love has taken its toll on me
She said Goodbye too many times before
And her heart is breaking in front of me
I have no choice cause I won't say goodbye anymore

I tried my best to feed her appetite
Keep her coming every night
So hard to keep her satisfied
Kept playing love like it was just a game
Pretending to feel the same
Then turn around and leave again

This love has taken its toll on me
She said Goodbye too many times before
And her heart is breaking in front of me
I have no choice cause I won't say goodbye anymore

I'll fix these broken things
Repair your broken wings
And make sure everything's alright
My pressure on her hips
Sinking my fingertips
Into every inch of you
Cause I know that's what you want me to do

[ 本帖最后由 睎睎 于 2007-7-25 15:25 编辑 ]

语缘

不错!! 加油努力吧

语缘

不错!! 加油努力吧

我不是FY

吐字有点散散的。。。风格上还是有那种味道的 哈哈

aoecheng

还可以啊，反正也没上心

黑白世界

不错!! 加油努力吧

fayefaye

哈哈...注意发音就好了...~!!要MAN点啊...

heshengxiaodiao

很好听的歌

Billie.J

哈哈第一次听DD的歌，声音满嫩的说，有点象阿伦卡特的声音~~~虽然唱工和声音技巧还不太成熟，不过敢于挑战这首难歌的勇气可嘉~~继续努力，支持新人ING~

隽逸

不错啊不错哈，加油哈！！！！！！！