向EMINEM神曲3AM致敬 - NIGHTMARES

三角函数

看了eminem的3AM音乐录影被强大的节奏刺激。

非常喜欢那份恐怖抓狂设不由己的潜意识活动，够阴森。说起这首歌，有天正好去我们区的小火车站送朋友，晚上10点多，地下通道里空无一人，只有一盏亮的刺眼的灯，一片惨白的环境里…3AM显得非常有杀伤力（妈呀，我再也不敢了）

厄……这次写的歌有点想刻意的往3AM上靠，有点弄巧成拙…… 想讲述一个外表看来很正常的人内心空虚压抑的阴影。老套路了……不要笑我……

歌词：
nightmares

verse1:
when nothin' bothers u, and u r desperate here, u know what mess u made but there's no aftermath any more

yo, like all the zombies get up from hell
these creepy shadows gether around and get u in helix
scared by darkness, screaming and bloodiness, wonder how to get rid of those dire basterds
i wanna wake up but i c-c-can't stop the thinkin' with the ch-ch-chaos won't end the dream.
seems my world is stucking in a big halloween and everyone's wearing a custom but only me without it!

i'm gradeful for everything i have and
it all drove me crazy and tortured me as bitter venom
they can hurt me cos i still want to care about them
i know they're all bullshits when i stop caring them
i kept them, treated them how come be the mosters, i fed them, raised them, to aganist me with all i wanted. they just watched my heart go broken.
if i knew , i wouldn't give mother***in' rats at..


chorus1:
i see u simle
i hear u cry
the ghosts haunting me and wispering around here all night

oh my nightmares
oh my nightmares
i'm feelin' sad
i know it's too late to confess


verse2:
what? what u said? say that again i will be kicking ur ass, stop smoking, how embarrassing, u r like a punky gangster, don't call me mom, this is alarm, u r a bad son!

you wanna talk about why i said u r bothering?
how can a son hate his own mother hey?
i think u forgot what the pressure u put on me!
u made the world in my eyes so smothery!

u nailed me up in your strategy
and u got me have no chocie while i wanna quit it.
i'm not a tool to fulfill your dream!
so put away nice things bring back the family!

leaving here, my mind is made up, i know without u i might get hurt by someone, but i got a suicide issue sence high school time, so i rather to be alone not with the nighmare.

chorus2:
i see u simle
i hear u cry
the ghosts haunting me and wispering around here all night

oh my nightmares
oh my nightmares
i'm feelin' sad
i know it's too late to confess

verse3:
hey, look who is here
who finally committed all the sins
u realized u let them down then
there's no another chance let them trust u again! and

i should be manly, not be mean and
i should be working harder to be a better boyfriend
i should be easy when a girl's walking away again,
i should be tough even i'm trying in vain vain vain!
no hero tonight saves the day
why u just make this so complicated?
it's only a nightmare tells u r a shithead!
forget the girl who u XXXX to.

the darkside of her i should fully be aware
the mosters ate my heart out just for dessert
it's long night, i can't find a comfort or a rest, don't tell me what i'm gonna what i found that...

chorus3:
i see u simle
i hear u cry
the ghosts haunting me and wispering around here all night

oh my nightmares
oh my nightmares
i'm feelin' sad
i know it's too late to confess

azurelucid

沙发我的～～～～～～～～～～～～～

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原创作品一定都要大大的支持一记的！！会写词就是好啊，羡慕！！

歌词写的好阴郁哦，哈哈哈，基调也够颓废。。。
哈哈哈，rap听的不多，这种有点另类风格更是没有接触过了～～
等rap高手们来做技术性评价吧～～

btw，那个3AM的MV真的把我吓到了。。。

Domian

我抢板凳~~~~~
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按我们平时的话来说, 你这种情况就叫抽风~~~哈哈哈
不过抽的还挺有水平 写了那么长一首....还喊的如此凄惨~~
类似这种原创 除了完全支持之外 还应该让你写篇"做后感"之类的 让你彻底抒发一下目前的思想动态~muahahah
seriously dude, that's awesome! good job indeed!

K

....听着确实很恐怖啊~~ 哈哈 是说氛围 不是说LZ的唱功
话说三角函数还会写rap啊 顶起顶起~~~

britneycc

地板先坐着。。。

PS：不知道该说什么····听了后 我“鸡”动了！

xd6704

和楼上一样。 听了后。鸡动了

kwocenting

哇... 很好呢 我覺得非常不錯
你們說mv恐怖 我就不看了
我怕看恐怖的 不然我真的睡不著了.

你怎麼有很多想法 我都不會 什麼時候我有靈感能寫首歌啊
唉~
我覺得如果可以加個女聲 HA~ 的聲音 (就是像恐怖片的那種聲音 不知道怎麼解釋) 會更精采哦.
支持起來!!!  

小阿凯

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太猛了
我真不好说什么了。。。。。

MesC

行李整理好了..心情呢?
看来函数最近思绪千万啊~ 难怪灵感泉涌. :D

我就喜欢你那种带劲的rap. xD

lanyou68

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