√新人在发一首MAROON5 的歌

nsync1982

新人在发一首MAROON5 的歌 THIS LOVE 请斑竹,还有各位大虾 多多指教,让小弟天天进步哈!谢谢了!
This Love

I was so high I did not recognize
The fire burning in her eyes
The chaos that controlled my mind
Whispered goodbye and she got on a plane
Never to return again
But always in my heart

This love has taken its toll on me
She said Goodbye too many times before
And her heart is breaking in front of me
I have no choice cause I won't say goodbye anymore

I tried my best to feed her appetite
Keep her coming every night
So hard to keep her satisfied
Kept playing love like it was just a game
Pretending to feel the same
Then turn around and leave again

This love has taken its toll on me
She said Goodbye too many times before
And her heart is breaking in front of me
I have no choice cause I won't say goodbye anymore

I'll fix these broken things
Repair your broken wings
And make sure everything's alright
My pressure on her hips
Sinking my fingertips
Into every inch of you
Cause I know that's what you want me to do

[ 本帖最后由 睎睎 于 2007-7-25 15:25 编辑 ]

熊猫奶爸

这个歌曲 比之前的要好很多  不仅音准上有所突破  而且感情拿捏的也很棒  就是后期有点过了  继续支持

cjed0803

不错哦,不过发音如果再推敲一下更好.支持一下

~黑胶~

不错!! 加油努力吧

小虎312

这个歌还是在电影里听到的~~~不错不错~~~~~`

luv3r3i

虽然有点问题,像是英文发音~
但总体来说还是有感觉的~

睎睎

这首唱的好很多。。。英文发音要注意一下。。。多听听原唱多学学。。。加油！！！！！！

myyaoxia

英文要加强啊！处理得有点点感觉过了~

唱的好。。继续加油！

Dirrt

嗯!!!!!!好听啊............. 不错........