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作者: Froestsea    时间: 2009-12-18 22:03:19     标题: 新人带来一首BSB的《Incomplete》

本帖最后由 Froestsea 于 2009-12-18 22:17 编辑

新人的见面礼,

嘿嘿,

有意见一定要提啊!

歌词:

empty spaces fill me up with holes
distant faces with no place left to go
without you within me i can't find no rest
where i'm going is anybody's guess

i've tried to go on like i never knew you
i'm awake but my world is half asleep
i pray for this heart to be unbroken
but without you all i'm going to be is incomplete
music
voices tell me i should carry on
but i am swimming in an ocean all alone
baby, my baby
it's written on your face
you still wonder if we made a big mistake
i've tried to go on like i never knew you
i'm awake but my world is half asleep
i pray for this heart to be unbroken
but without you all i'm going to be is incomplete
i don't mean to drag it on, but i can't seem to let you go
i don't wanna make you face this world alone
i wanna let you go (alone)

i've tried to go on like i never knew you
i'm awake but my world is half asleep
i pray for this heart to be unbroken
but without you all i'm going to be is incomplete
incomplete
作者: Wunai    时间: 2009-12-18 22:07:05

本帖最后由 Wunai 于 2009-12-18 22:11 编辑

先抢个沙发再说~
我来给建议了~
首先  第一嗓子着实惊了我一下~ 嗓音很赞的
LZ唱中音那种沙哑的感觉还不错~
整首歌感情释放的也还算不错
不过LZ高音有点窄……位置太靠前  应该多用用气息才对
由于没听过原唱……发音我也不知道标不标准~

LZ加油  条件不错的~能唱那么高……我望尘莫及哈   
作者: 雷的囧囧    时间: 2009-12-18 22:14:34

晕了,你动作好快,还没有注意就被抢了沙发,我板凳了!
唱得好啊,摸摸~~~
作者: 7658422    时间: 2009-12-18 22:35:03

只能抢个地板了...支持 支持
作者: kevinscottdj    时间: 2009-12-18 22:40:42

还不错
副歌感觉差了点,应该就是气息的原因吧
我也说不清楚,以前我和几个哥们都是瞎唱,等高人来指点吧
作者: Raphier    时间: 2009-12-18 22:54:26

嗓音不错!!!!!!!!就是发声位置要纠正一下!!!挺有潜质的说!!!!
作者: Froestsea    时间: 2009-12-19 10:23:35

偶木有学过声乐,唱起来很不专业的~
作者: 雷的囧囧    时间: 2009-12-22 13:04:42

弟弟谦虚了,本嗓说明了一切!
作者: w!ck    时间: 2009-12-22 16:41:39

支持,严重支持,交个朋友同是新人嘿嘿
作者: fengzi0577    时间: 2009-12-23 01:03:18

简单一句来说...就是这歌高了点...降个调的话会宣泄的更好...有些高音是练出来的....有些是天生的...无法改变...




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