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作者: Suzy 时间: 2009-2-10 04:36:54 标题: Rihanna - Unfaithful ~ by Suzy*~ =)

本帖最后由 Suzy 于 2009-2-10 04:41 编辑

07 年的作品~ 已經很舊了~
最近沒新歌，只好 po 舊點的~ 不要介意喔 ^^*~
很喜歡歌曲的旋律，聽的感覺~
還有，謝謝回我在這裡第一個帖子的人喔~~
真的很開心 ^^*~ thank you~
希望你們會喜歡~ ^^

Song: Unfaithful*~~
Songwriters: Ne-Yo, Erik Hermansen, Mikkel S. Eriksen
Producer: Stargate

Story of my life
Searching for the right
But it keeps avoiding me
Sorrow in my soul
Cause it seems that wrong
Really loves my company

He's more than a man
And this is more than love
The reason that the sky is blue
The clouds are rolling in
Because I'm gone again
And to him I just can't be true

And I know that he knows I'm unfaithful
And it kills him inside
To know that I am happy with some other guy
I can see him dying

I don't wanna do this anymore
I don't wanna be the reason why
Everytime I walk out the door
I see him die a little more inside
I don't wanna hurt him anymore
I don't wanna take away his life
I don't wanna be...
A murderer

I feel it in the air
As I'm doing my hair
Preparing for another date
A kiss upon my cheek
As he reluctantly
Asks if I'm gonna be out late
I say I won't be long
Just hanging with the girls
A lie I didn't have to tell
Because we both know
Where I'm about to go
And we know it very well

Cause I know that he knows I'm unfaithful
And it kills him inside
To know that I am happy with some other guy
I can see him dying

I don't wanna do this anymore
I don't wanna be the reason why
Everytime I walk out the door
I see him die a little more inside
I don't wanna hurt him anymore
I don't wanna take away his life
I don't wanna be...
A murderer

Our love, his trust
I might as well take a gun and put it to his head
Get it over with
I don't wanna do this
Anymore
Uh
Anymore (anymore)

I don't wanna do this anymore
I don't wanna be the reason why
And everytime I walk out the door
I see him die a little more inside
And I don't wanna hurt him anymore
I don't wanna take away his life
I don't wanna be...
A murderer (a murderer)

No no no no

Yeah yeah yeah

作者: kwocenting 时间: 2009-2-10 12:03:02

哈哈哈.沙發由我來坐.唱起來有自己的味道哦.不錯不錯.
只是覺得有點平淡.如果有點激情會更完美.(我自己也是唱得很平淡,還敢說人家.不好意思呢

)
我本身也超愛這首歌.超想錄這首歌.等有空再錄吧.
到時,也來聽聽我的版本吧.哈哈哈.
支持支持.

作者: melodia 时间: 2009-2-10 13:40:49

仙来果然来了一些很棒很有潜力的新晋女声~
很喜欢你开头细节的处理~很细腻~
词头的处理会让俺想到Britney S~
第二段好像有几句尾音有点小不稳~
A lie I didn't have to tell的tell
And we know it very well的well
其他都很到位了~
会继续关注的呵呵~

作者: coolan 时间: 2009-2-10 19:55:08

略显平淡，太柔了~
欠缺一点激情~

作者: Jane.tz 时间: 2009-2-11 14:59:07

本帖最后由殊简于 2009-2-11 15:01 编辑

个人感觉很不错了
声音很清亮
是比Rihanna少点HIGH的东西
但是多了点清爽-0-
很喜欢你的处理
高音和尾音的处理有点像vanessa hudgens

作者: 帅力杀手 时间: 2009-2-11 15:04:09

很好听！支持！！！！

作者: Suzy 时间: 2009-2-13 02:33:23

回 kwocenting~~
my thoughts exactly~~ XD 我自己也覺得平了點 -o-"
不過又不知道改在那激一點 o.O 結果，盡量了做了一個很少的變化 o.O (所以，很平 XD)
呵，喜歡就錄呀 ! 我一定會聽的 =)

回 melodia~~
呵，聽得很 detailed~~ 恩 xD 因為我低音不穩，又不知道怎麼去練習~
我本身的 vocal range 也不算大~ 太低，太高，也會成為問題 ><"!
我的 tell 跟 well 那裡，是不夠氣轉下去低音(ie, 要放鬆)，所以轉音不穩，卻變得很飄~~
(我這個沒藥救的，真的不太會，哈)
等下去聽你的歌~~ 呵呵 ~~ 有耳福了~~~~ hehe ^^

回 coolan~
yup, i agree xD

回殊简~~
謝謝你喜歡喔 ^^

回帅力杀手~~
thanks =)

作者: 七宝 时间: 2009-2-13 09:02:59

很细腻支持起 ~~~建议录nelly f的歌

作者: 阿梅88号 时间: 2009-2-13 11:10:22

音色很不错，蛮干净的，唯独声音与气息配合尚需联系，那样声音会更有穿刺力。楼主的演唱进棚还行，现场的话，爆发力和张力都还需进一步扩大化。
一家之言，仅供参考。

作者: Suzy 时间: 2009-2-19 00:50:09

回七宝 ~~~
謝謝喔~~ ^^
nelly 我也會覺得很難 o.O 那個 feel 也超難抓~~
你的歌很好聽 o.O 真的很 pro~~

回阿梅88号 ~~~
恩~~ 對呀，我沒爆發力 o.O
都不知道怎麼練好~~ 用盡力也是這樣 ><!
謝謝你見意 =)

作者: blueghost 时间: 2009-3-2 20:00:41

整体还算不错了,就是胸声少了些.爆发力不够.

作者: yzlx1225 时间: 2009-3-2 20:45:07

咱俩的口味相同这么难你都能唱佩服佩服

作者: shermini 时间: 2009-12-1 22:14:07

找原唱來對比了，每個人都有適合自己的風格吧，還是喜歡柔柔暖暖的suzy，偶爾也在裏面聽到力量，聽到就很享受了。

作者: 理想青年 时间: 2009-12-1 23:17:28

下下来听，我要下下来听！！！

作者: qhxntnzy 时间: 2010-9-17 21:04:19

哈哈哈.沙發由我來坐.唱起來有自己的味道哦.不錯不錯.
只是覺得有點平淡.如果有點激情會更完美.(我自己也是唱得很平淡,還敢說人家.不好意思呢)
我本身也超愛這首歌.超想錄這首歌.等有空再錄吧.
到時,也來聽聽我的版本吧.哈哈哈.
支持支持.

作者: hi_sabrina 时间: 2010-9-21 21:33:48

很不错，发音很标准

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